Dear, Mum
I really want some new running shoes from Nike there the newest model and apparently there amazing. So please, please, please can you buy me them, oh and I don't just want them I NEED THEM I WILL DIE WITHOUT THEM!!! And I'm not taking no for an answer. I have three reasons why I need them
- They're amazing and I need them
- There the newest model
And finally
- I NEED THEM!!
Ok I have one more reason
- They make me look fast and yeah
So those are the reasons why I need them, by the way, I did this to persuade you so PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CAN YOU BUY ME THEM.
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This is my week 2 Term 4 Chapter Chat I did a persuasive writing it was very fun to make. In the list I did more then 3 reasons because it made it more dramatic. My favourite part of doing the list was the part were it said: "I NEED THEM!!!"
ReplyDeleteTino pai, Jolie, I can see you have made sure to check what you needed to include in your letter! Next week I would like you to make sure you have told us how your activity relates to the story.
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